Things I like about it:

• The reflection of his toes in the floor kinda work. I’d rather have them a little less bright, but it seems the reflectance material I used was additive only.
• Originally, I didn’t bother building geometry in where the benches are, so there were weird inconsistencies where his shadows fell. That’s fixed. And they look like they fall in the right places.
• Took me a while to comp out those poles in front of him. They took a lot of work to get right.

Things I -don’t- like about it:

• The shadows fall wrong. There’s no area light primitive in Max, so I’ll either have to find a plug in, or render it at work using entropy.
• Also, he seems a lot brighter on my monitor at work. He looked a bit darker at home, and he fit in a bit better.
• And he needs more noise. Or some jpeg artifacting or something.